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Tuesday 8 March 2016

The Good Samaritan

The Good Samaritan
As I ride on my donkey I see a wounded man lying on the hard, hot ground. It must be burning his back. As people walk along they look at him. I get off my donkey and go to him. The sun becomes brighter and hotter. I see that his clothes have been teared into pieces. His blood, the colour of fire, and salty sweat drip down his face. He looks at me and just stares. I lift his head and he lies on me. The trees sway from side to side whispering to me. I pour oil and wine to heal his wounds. I carry him onto my donkey and ride away.

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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous3/09/2016

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  2. Anonymous3/09/2016

    I Like How You Used A Lot Of Interesting Adjectives

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  3. Anonymous3/09/2016

    I Like How You Used A Lot Of Interesting Adjectives

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  4. Anonymous5/17/2016

    Hi Mele!
    Love your story about the good samaritan
    Well Done!

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  5. Anonymous5/24/2016

    This is an amazing piece of work Mele! I love your story about the Good Samaritan story. I thought that it was written well and that there were no mistakes. Keep up the great work!

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  6. Anonymous5/24/2016

    Great parable Mele! Keep up the amazing work!

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  7. Anonymous5/24/2016

    Great parable Mele! Keep up the amazing work!

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